Comments of chapter undefined of Agartha - Quest for the Legacy

Honestly, this is just very anticlimatic. This was the first chapter so it's impossible to try making the readers feel emotional or some kind of connections with the characters. This death of king doesnt really tell me anything nor do I really care about it since he is just a random character I just met/read

😱😱 Death sure is tragic but atleast the King died with a smile.

I must say, this is a very visually pleasing start to a story. Your descriptions for places and objects are so detailed that I can vividly see it. Great start, keep it up!

An end in the beginning, how tragic!

Nice intro

King died..... ok... 🤨...

Very intriguing start.... could pique the interest of us, readers...

You'll have to read then

my curiosity piqued!!!

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