Comments of chapter undefined of Glamorous Journey of the Female Protagonist

haha she could even use her iPhone to record al the info he tells her lol

The story is aa... little odd in that while it's written/being told very simplistically, it's at the same time convoluted if that makes sense The author is trying to fit in WAY to many ideas in a VERY short period of time into it. The business aspects of the story are fine, but the fact that the FL's throwing magic around like it's going to go out of style tomorrow mmm... not so much. Dial it back some, she should have used mine control the first time instead of wasting "energy" when she has/had no idea of what she would encounter further on in her journey. She could've gone back at a later time and make it up to the old man/driver with either a favor (like healing) or funds after she was settled a little. The second healing should've been the first one due to it being the "action" that from there on her rise would occur from, also her energy recovery time waaay to short, just one healing should've taken at least a week to recover from. In short tone down the magic and you'll be doing a lot better in the quality of said story, I hope I made sense to you guys.

Oh.. That's nice she can bring iPhone there.

Author is too powerful! Please bless us with more good chapters!

hi