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Comments of chapter undefined of Astral Pet Store

Witret
WitretLv15Witret

I dislike when an author cripples the intelligence of characters for the sake of trying to make the mc look cool. That 'ambush' was pathetic, the literally just showed up and said they were on MCs side and expected this immensely cunning plan to work... Also there was some rapid gender swapping with a character going from 'her eyes' to 'his eyes' in 2 sentences.

IRocks
IRocksLv11IRocks

thanks for the chapters