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??One member is forbidden from being attacked?? (but does not say they are unable to attack others) Why not give that to Lin and have him go full offensive without having to worry about defence? the other side cannot do much to stop him as any move against him could be viewed as an attack and therefore against the rules. I understand that giving the 'cannot be attacked' status to a support could be good, but i am sure they could defend him anyway. I feel like an unkillable damage dealer (who can 1-shot people) is better than an unkillable support. There is nothing to say that the Fey cannot be targeted even if the individual cannot. The supports power comes from his Fey and they can still be killed. While Lin can channel the power of his Fey directly without putting his Fey at risk.
There is plenty of room for more chapters if the author wants to put in more reaction chapters or jump to a different point of view. Im not sure when the fighting will start, but i doubt the next series of 'general' fights and the group battle will end within the next month, with how the author likes to make scenes drag on.
Author, i dont know if you will see this, but i notice you do interact quite a bit with the comments. when you say 'in-game currency', do you really mean 'real money transactions' (RMT). copper, silver, and gold in the world of Warcraft are in-game currencies, and it seems like gil already fills this role in the game of your story. Spending real-life money for in-game gold or gil would be a RMT
just though this after i commented, I think the MC mentioned before that when the sky whale is up and running people may be able to come back from marsh world to visit or live on the sky whale as that would give them access to the world but stop them running off (would still have to limit/monitor communication in some way)
MC has also offered to bring the workers family so if they do that they would all be stuck. In regards to reqursting things be delivered, unless they have someone delivering new product updates to them they will be limited in what they request by what existed before they went to the marsh world.
I thought he was using the identity of sky cities leader at the moment, if the pink fey suddenly appears with his sister there is a good chance more people can link two of his identities. I wonder if the author will take this into account or just ignore it...
I dislike when an author cripples the intelligence of characters for the sake of trying to make the mc look cool. That 'ambush' was pathetic, the literally just showed up and said they were on MCs side and expected this immensely cunning plan to work... Also there was some rapid gender swapping with a character going from 'her eyes' to 'his eyes' in 2 sentences.
i am going to take a wild guess that the Mayhem star zone is a place that a celestial has not taken over to run because it is too chaotic and likely has several heavenly lord level individuals that would cause issues with a takeover attempt (even if they cannot fight a celestial they can cause problems that arent worth dealing with so celestials avoid it)... lets see
I think its a bit reaching to say that if the clans find out that MC can semi-infinitely revive they will turn humans into test subjects in case they can revive too. Its much more likely they will believe he has a treasure and try to get it out of him - he is the sole odd case and the clans have been dealing with humans long before he got there. Also would the clans want to make multiple people enemies because they cannot be killed - they seem like just the type of people you dont want to target.
It seems to be a weird feature of gaining small worlds, once a character gains them they seem to focus on person v person fights and whos mastery of laws is better. At higher power levels Pets seem to be used for actions seperate from their master e.g. celestial is too busy so they send a pet off to protect a disciple or gather resources.