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Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth of the Heavenly Empress

Aaruci
AaruciLv4Aaruci

i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story. Can you have it edited please?

phoenix_8888
phoenix_8888Lv15phoenix_8888

It seems that the original SH prior to her accident was the ultimate genius of geniuses with so many contacts its seems like it exceeded internet connections and then some. She was extremely powerful. Now in the new body that is about to happen again. Here's the problem, it seems that with her departure everyone is now an idiot and incompetent. That is a turn off and boring.

Jade_Lyn
Jade_LynLv3Jade_Lyn

I always like the fl of this author. Simply awesome. I suddenly miss ran ran.

sadiah69
sadiah69Lv13sadiah69

Anan...you're still arrogant and think so highly of yourself... Indeed it's the truth...without Su Families your father is nobody.. 😏😏😏

hottiegamer
hottiegamerLv5hottiegamer

experience

hottiegamer
hottiegamerLv5hottiegamer

experience

Nathan_C_5177
Nathan_C_5177Lv10Nathan_C_5177

Hmm interesting

lostandlazee
lostandlazeeLv15lostandlazee

Wahhh i really hope this book gets selected..i really cant wait for more.

kabira_fic
kabira_ficLv5kabira_fic

Thanks for the chapter its interesting and the flow is marvelous