i really like your work and the story line. But this novel needs some serious editing. Its more like machine translated which makes one lose interest in the story.
I only rated it 4-star..because I would like to have SH the one who initiated the cancellation of engagement.. and also publish to the world that her supposed to be fiance is having an affair with her half sister...
you spit blood upon remembering this point in your life in the future and you could even say that if only you've heed to your mother's words that time...
I bet you are going to come crawling back with your tails wagging and begging at d end. but it will be too late by then š¤ š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£
At first I thought she was the leader of that band of terrorist what was being hunted down... š¤¦š½āāļøš¤£ but this does make a good question how did those she lock up get an early release parole?