MyStomachHurts
Your dialogue between characters you understand is pretty good. I like how you’ve written All Might. Not just making him so morally superior that he tackles future problems because he believes he’s right about how to be a Herp. Really these latest two chapters’ conversations are my favourite interaction in this story so far. Miriko and Madara’s first meeting being second and having nearly no words haha. Thanks for writing, really fun to read.
You got something wrong about heroes from bnha. It was said (or said between the lines, I don't remember correctly) that they're akin new form police special forces. They have all rights to use force against the villains including lethal means if they cannot capture them. It's like police SWAT fighting against some terrorists. If you've hold them - great job, get a bonus. If you've killed them - good job, give me report why don't you capture them. Killing not welcomed but still acceptable. It's just who, when and how that happened. Or do you really think that anybody from top 10 haven't killed at least once? And let's not even mention Enji Todoroki and All Might who has confirmed kills in canon.