Comments of chapter undefined of Psychic Parasite

Everyone in this world speaks like a robot. Too many intelligent words make it sound forced. Instead of “They will impart upon you all the necessary knowledge in a comprehensive manner”, try “ They’ll teach you all you need to know there.” Same meaning, but less formal, showing comfort and familiarity.

it is definitely an interesting story so far. my guesses so far the parasite queen is being controlled into producing these parasites by the military to strengthen people. But the military is seemingly unaware that the queen has left a backdoor for her to let her parasites take control of people in the future. which is why the old man wants the queen dead to avoid such a future.

MAn so slow just take that good them sould and rip it off :/

This is not how normal people speak. this is how an author would describe things. It should not be coming out of a character's mouth. It just sounds weird. If this kind of thing continues I don't think I'll be able to continue with this story.

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I don’t understand why they use living parasites though or why even parasites

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