Overlord_Venus
There's so much exposition and I really don't care to read it; I need to be given something cool for me to want to read this, so far it's just a bunch of places and people I don't care about at all. This story does a terrible job of setting up the premise with the awkward and vague synopsis and then proceeds to bore the living daylights out of me. The author said this was about a Psychic Parasite MC and that I should read the free chapters to get into the story but frankly other than wasting my time there has been nothing in this story of interest to me- I think the only reason I'll be 'into the story' by chapter 60+ is because of the Sunken Cost of the Gambler's Fallacy. Also, just so the author doesn't feel like it's his fault, all the names have turned me off the story because I dislike most things Indian other than a few select dishes- I find them to be a backwards, dirty and rude people and that's not a racist thing, it's a culture thing, I mean come on, they eat with their hands and wipe without toilet paper.