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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

lemole
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thanks for the chapter can you guys give me a review on my novel [star contractor] any note will be appreciated

Wozo141PL
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nice chapters but Bad Timing for Quinn though, i expect the Squad will come too And Apart from Sil everyone else is useless.

DaoistiVON0F
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Quinn isn’t in the best situation. With most of his powers sapped by the Demon form he’s at a huge disadvantage. The only hope is for Sil and the others arrive in time to help Quinn and the Champion fight Immortui to point of a promised fate before he leaves to heal or Sil uses his powers to transport them all away to give more time to prepare.

Antawon_Douglas
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This was a great chapter. The description of Immortui was crazy!

Grant_Walker_0416
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OK, there have been some pretty cool entrances during this story, but I will admit Immortui's is quite impressive. Plus I love the description of Immortui's armor.I really hope that Calva works with Quinn to hold of Immortui long enough for Sil and the others to arrive and get them out of there, because I seriously doubt Quinn is ready to face him at the minute.

ElPrincipeAustral
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Immortui and Megamind would get along well with those entrances 😂😁😂

Jesk8
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The moment has arrived.

Tom_McCurdy
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time to flee!!!

CarelessWhisperer
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Interesting… I feel like this is not building up to a fight. If it did, it would be like a learn by failure with a savior McGuffin fight.

DarkShadowBlaze
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Luckily Sil and the rest will be there to pull Quinn out of danger.

Wozo141PL
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