Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

The whole timing since the Talens left the Vampire Settlement is more than confusing! It took a week to organize the army and a few days to even reach the Namrik planet and take control of it, but apparently they have conquered dozens of planets in the week since they left(?) Also, by my calculations it took Quinn around 36 hours to defeat the God-Slayers (most of it the 26 hours resting from using the Demon Form) yet he hasn't returned to Amranium even though that should have been before Layla arrived (not to mention it took Quinn a week to reach the 10th floor).

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A family reunion for Quinn and to find the Blades are there as well. Hopefully the creation of the armor will have time before the invasion.

Well no surprise that the Talen family destroyed their way through the tests, but a bit upset that Russ basically cheated using his guide. The tests seem easier then when Quinn did them either that or longer passed then we realised. Quinn shouldn't have taken too long to win reach of his fights so a few days at best.

Banger ch apter

This is gonna be too good

huhh jack and Jim better be preparee

it's all just a matter of time. Or a screwed up timeline. It's all mixed up but I like it! Adds to the excitement and anticipation!

It's not really surprising that everyone has been able to get to Floor 49, although I was kind of hoping that Russ would suffer a lot more, but I'm also really happy that it was Vicky and Jake who turned up to speak to everyone and not Bliss, because at least they got a warning, and Quinn won't have to murder Bliss for being in his presence

Finally clashes with Jim and Jack. Quinn will kick their ars*