Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Why Leo didn’t tell Paul about the original Vampire is what I would like to know. Seems to me that’s some pretty important information that should have been shared with the second in command with Quinn gone.

Sigh. Yeah I don’t think im going to renew priv this time around. Been a good ride.

I find it crazy that if Cia hadn't told cindy about Quinn killing her quite possibly none of this mess would have happened and Quinn wouldn't end up killing Cia...

Meh. Author once again is showing his lack of ability to write resolution. The giant showdown we were expecting, Cia with a predictable death, no resolution for any other characters, characters choosing to withhold information that may allow For better results. Very disappointed.

Poor Layla hope Quinn gets free soon so he can comfort her. Also get revenge by killing Cindy Cia's vision has yet to happen so hopefully Quinn will go and finish the job.

I like how Peter is being more utilized now because he's as strong as Quinn physically and he barely gets used

they're going on a science lab hunt and their gonna find a big one?

first

I wonder what Logan has planned to try and help Borden fight next time, maybe he is planning to head to the hidden lab and try and create something. I hope Layla starts to feel better soon and realises that Cia knew she would die like that, but chose to go there anyway so she could save her. I still want to know what side the Original is on having now taken Alex but I suppose we'll just have to wait and see.

What about Fex and Nate?

I give Peter props for trying. I hope he keeps the wolverine claws!

oh gosh, I foresee more trouble XD people always going and throwing themselves in danger at the worst possible times!

Brilliant chapter!

You sound impatient yes there are threads, all of which are tied to the main story. Some of which have been resolved already. You don't offer anything in you criticism other than complaining the same thing you are accusing others of. A least wait until the end if this book before throwing a fit. It's he's writing style it works for some readers and not so much for others if you aren't enjoying it then leave instead of trying to make him change, because your style wouldn't be great to everyone either.

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my big thing is I pay for privileged of 8 chapters how come I only get 2 a day yesterday was only 1 this is confusing since I thought I'd get 8 chapters available

Why is it that there are no mission reports being submitted for review... Leo and Paul are from the military and so are the two hundred some odd recently turned soldiers... Everyone should be used to turning in mission or even action reports with details of everything that happened; they all were prior to returning to the vampire planet but all of a sudden no is doing it? why!