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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Mathew_Green
Mathew_GreenLv15Mathew_Green

That ending was so lame! So is quinn just planning on staying dead because because that will be so obvious that its him doing it when he just shows up later saying im ok now? You should write something that is at least a little bit believable and realistic i mean do you take these people as a dog when fake throw it and the dog chases it anyways?

Phytrix
PhytrixLv11Phytrix

Lol no way it's just that simple. She already expected someone from their party to be Blood Evolver. Who's the only person not present? Quinn? If Linda can't make that connection then you're really treating the readers as dummies

DarkShadowBlaze
DarkShadowBlazeLv15DarkShadowBlaze

Oh I forgot that no one else knows of night demon outside the base they would never put to and two together. However bad news is that his friends ended up tipping her off about blood evolver so once she figures it out it will lead her to Quinn.

DaoistUnbespoken
DaoistUnbespokenLv13DaoistUnbespoken

All this for a king tier crystal? Seems super shortsighted

AnonymousOK
AnonymousOKLv14AnonymousOK

Does the masker still matter?

Grant_Walker_0416
Grant_Walker_0416Lv14Grant_Walker_0416

Holy shit the Night Demon returns and in literally the most epic way and I hope that Quinn revels that it is him underneath the gear just to show how powerful he is

ThatGuySmylze
ThatGuySmylzeLv14ThatGuySmylze

Night mask... an excuse to kill off Kong?

ecogreen4
ecogreen4Lv14ecogreen4

Wow, thanks for the chapter. Kong is a certifiable @#$&. Nevermind whatever sacrifices he made, turning on team mates is a big no. I guess now Linda's regard for Quinn's group has given a 180. So, even if Kong survives the hunt, he is done with the faction. I was all tense reading the hunt. Poor Linda, she needs a healer asap, for that internal bleeding.

Jonathan_Viau
Jonathan_ViauLv14Jonathan_Viau

first thanks

KJ_Hebert
KJ_HebertLv14KJ_Hebert

I understand wanting the crystal and the kill to be steonger, but I disagree with hiding until the last hit. I understand wanting to keep his identity a secret as well and I may be a little more OK with this if that was the plan all along, but its still a little shady on his part

Djinn_Lucci
Djinn_LucciLv15Djinn_Lucci

This fight animated would be amazing

Norey
NoreyLv14Norey

Ohh what a twist i didn’t see that coming at all. Bro Quinn is always a few steps a head of the pack. Like He had to use shadow hop to go somewhere else and probably took out the black beast. Just to came back to get the finishing blow on the red beast.

Gimei
GimeiLv14Gimei

Lol, the man in the mask strikes again!

Tim_Phillips
Tim_PhillipsLv15Tim_Phillips

forgot about quinns alter the night demon, glad he's come back out to play

NixiePixie
NixiePixieLv11NixiePixie

oh well...sheep!!! that's how!!! Big brain!!!

Daniel_Crawford_9089
Daniel_Crawford_9089Lv14Daniel_Crawford_9089

Excellent chapter, cant wait to see how quinn explains this lol

Travis_Beecher
Travis_BeecherLv12Travis_Beecher

niiiice. good action sequences. look forward to maybe a dialogue between them before Quinn breaks off or we go back to the emperor group. also, Quinn killing a king tier? psshh. easy money

Kyle_Smith_7680
Kyle_Smith_7680Lv14Kyle_Smith_7680

this was a great chapter. loved the action. Truly want to see quinn go all out again though. lolol. hes got to be my favorite MC. his adventure to gain power and family has been fantastically put together. thank you for the great work again JKS.

Austin_Graham_8375
Austin_Graham_8375Lv14Austin_Graham_8375

Lets goooooo, Im calLing that linda Becomes prt of the group and gets turned

Redfuio
RedfuioLv12Redfuio

Exp

Kit_Worrall
Kit_WorrallLv14Kit_Worrall

Couldnt Quin have got the final blow and just absorb the crystal like hes done Many times Before and then he could have acted like he knew nothing and they would have any idea he had it