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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

righteousXsinner
righteousXsinnerLv14righteousXsinner

you have that genius of ending chapters on a high note. I want more

Dragimlin
DragimlinLv15Dragimlin

I hope the author slows down some on the overuse of cliffhangers. I feel like he has developed a habit of using them once or more a day as an effort to bring readers back. When in reality at least for me the constant use of cliffhangers is making me want to wait for chapters to pile up before reading them so I don't feel left wanting once or more a day. Which would result in less votes at least if I am not the only one feeling this way, maybe I am who knows.

mikeyeli
mikeyeliLv14mikeyeli

Freddy my man you were awesome, we'll miss you.

ecogreen4
ecogreen4Lv14ecogreen4

What a way to figure out what Freddie's ability was. I hope Quinn can add him to the Cursed fam, though I guess he'd be another ghoul or wight? 🤷 Such a tragic scene, I hope his gesture is not wasted in Kazz (though it seems that she would dismiss it rudely). sThanks for the chapter. Your editing effort seems to be paying off.

_tin_710
_tin_710Lv14_tin_710

Absolutely tragic 😶😔 why did you make me love him soo. maybe he just won't have a leg..... please?

Anthony_Neitling
Anthony_NeitlingLv14Anthony_Neitling

This story has me so entranced. I find myself hating being caught up because I keep wanting new chapters.

Jonathan_Reece
Jonathan_ReeceLv14Jonathan_Reece

For god sake!!!!

BaBe1982
BaBe1982Lv15BaBe1982

Hope Quinn Brings him back😢 and turn Freddy into curse family memeber

Satkre
SatkreLv15Satkre

poor guy... now everyone will recognize him as the Cursed Child

Avalon_Grey
Avalon_GreyLv13Avalon_Grey

Dude thay was brutal!!

Kryonic
KryonicLv15Kryonic

I knew it, he was too likable to have kept alive. But still, could you please not break my heart like that?

Wywildman92
Wywildman92Lv15Wywildman92

it's sad to see Quinn needs to change so much, also R.I.P old man. also what about the ship that Quinn and gang arrived in? was it confiscated or did he forget to ask what happened to it?

BeetleB
BeetleBLv15BeetleB

mfw: "swap"

Autoferthesis
AutoferthesisLv13Autoferthesis

Don't the gang have their own shuttle, that they rode in on, that they own? If shuttles are so valuable and expensive why isn't it being used by either the gang or being rented to the Crows? The shuttle is surely valuable seeing as it came from a prototype high end military starship. Also, for someone with super senses and who has a stated power of super speed it's awfully convenient that Quinn was just staring into the sun or whatever while a party member was being ambushed by a threat of above average size, they know is likely to be nearby, in shallow water explicitly said to make things easy to see. Or was Freddy just wearing a red shirt today. Even if we're using the sudden bouts of stupidity for Quinn that the author is bringing out more and more, Paul should have known better than to split the party in monster territory. Having party members killed or injured on your first outing is not a good look.

Grant_Walker_0416
Grant_Walker_0416Lv14Grant_Walker_0416

Bloody hell we only just met Freddy and he has just sacrificed himself for Kazz and I hope that Quinn and the other kill the Hypo boss thing to get justice for him

starsa32
starsa32Lv13starsa32

Nooooo! That’s sad. Hopefully Quinn can save him!

Maverick11
Maverick11Lv15Maverick11

😭😭😭😭😭

Xelto_Oreventa
Xelto_OreventaLv15Xelto_Oreventa

Possible save? If he can turn him he might be able to save him. doubt it though.

Minky4981
Minky4981Lv13Minky4981

Great chapter, poor Freddy got chomped

Emilio_Nieves
Emilio_NievesLv15Emilio_Nieves

Every day I read this I want more

ThatGuySmylze
ThatGuySmylzeLv14ThatGuySmylze

Well thats a terrible thing to do. Indtroduce us to an amazing character just to kill him off like that.