Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Dear author or translator, can you please fix the writing errors, it might hinder other readers and we don't want you to lose points for bad translations.

if he doesn't grab them all, imma be pissed

So he literally discovers hundreds of crystals embedded into the cave walls around him and he only takes one??? Hey genius, just grab them all and put them in shadow storage!!! Calling it, at some point, info on the caves reaches the military and kick everyone offworld to hoard the goods for themselves.

Some of the grammar is starting to have some basic mistakes. When Cia is around I feel like Peter should be mentioned as Pio if it's a thought from Cia. Still a good story!

that cave is a CHEAT I REPEAT THAT CAVE IS A HUGE CHEAT EKRIWVXZK

Why tf can't he just use the dimensional storage? That's a part of the shadow ability (Apparently a basic part since he got it immediately) and even if Fex doesn't know about it, the head of his family (His dad) would so there wouldn't be any real harm and, if the crystals are everywhere, there's significant gains to be had

I really hope that one day author will talk about vorden secret on how he can have three different personalities

What increase in stat will be of these strange crystals are they of dead humans or what?

And what is that? Beasts are being grown here?

so the new stone goals means 2 chapters per 2 days instead of 1 chapter daily?? Im

Thanks

Time to harvest the crystal

Dear author, Do you have any intention of publishing this in a book format? I spent $100 to get enough coins to read your story and wouldn't hesitate for a second to buy a hard copy. If you decide to publish please let me know.

Thanks

OP Quinn in bound

I actualy hope he changes cia too but that would be a bit too much, for now he can only change 2 people

if Layla's dying Quinn will propably make her a vamp right?

K

I feel like the app update has caused your capitalization errors to go up significantly. This chapter especially.