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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Commented

    Agin? Again

    Agin, Layla had heard those words. There was nothing she could do and it was true.
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Posted

    The start was a bit slow but now I can't wait to read what's coming next. Almost all the time I am sitting at the edge of my seat reading this story. Still some typos but hey, for someone that might not be English this is really well written.

    The Mysterious Black Magician
    Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Replied to asaade_ragnarokm

    just skip until chapter 50 or so. then it starts to really get interesting. I feel like the author listened to the complains and sped up the character development.

    The Mysterious Black Magician
    Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Commented

    Whatever it was that possessed

    Whatever was that that possessed Mr. Ult, it must be some kind of entity that could crush them into tiny pieces in just a little lift of his finger.
    The Mysterious Black Magician
    Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Commented

    Dear author or translator, can you please fix the writing errors, it might hinder other readers and we don't want you to lose points for bad translations.

    Ch 244 Strange crystals
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Commented

    Sorry but this isn't even a sentence. It is better to say. "Will you stop running?" Logan complained while looking at Cia

    "You stop running will you." Logan complained while looking at cia.
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Commented

    this is such a pain in the arse. not pian

    "This is such a pian in the arse, whatever i have to deal with though he will to." Cia thought.
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Commented

    She needed to be carful? should be careful

    There was always the chance that the small amount of light could be radiating from a beast, or it could just be a raw crystal. Because of this, as Cia ran she needed to be carful about her footing. Not being able to see where or what she was taking steps into. It was a cave and they were deep underground. With the floors being uneven and travelling in the dark, Cis was being naturally cautious.
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • legend_jerry
    legend_jerry3yr
    Commented

    maybe it should be. From what the light came she didn't know.

    The cave was dark and it was hard for her to see, but each of the tunnels gave off a little reflection of light. what she didn't know.
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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