JKSManga
That whole plan does not make any damn sense. What was the goal seriously ATTRACT ATTENTION. I thought this whole thing was about stealing truedream power using his own power or killing him or whatever is clever but no it was just an attack to recover Peter. Then couldn't they just not go, what was the point, Peter could have just fled, be buried or whatever days ago. This is so fđ¤cking stupid. It just make no sense, there's no purpose. I'm starting to think the plot is not planned in advance but made up on the fly.
how many authors have you spoken to? most of them do not think of the details of the story until its time to write it. only the broad strokes are planned in advance. this isn't just webnovel but traditionally published authors as well. the major difference is that traditionally published authors go through a period of editing and proofreading with their publishers and can still edit parts of their storylines before the official release. meanwhile webnovel authors have a day to write the next chapter sometimes. of course they are gonna feel like they weren't planned. because they don't have time to edit their storyline to make better sense.
You wanna know what's a bigger problem? The bodyguard who saw Quinn's abilities is alive, this means the moment quinn's abilities are publicly exposed, truedream can make the connection and quinn will be public enemy #1. Additionally, as blood evolver in the VR game, he has already publicly exposed half of his abilities, meaning all truedream really needs to do is connect some dots to discover blood evolver was the one who attacked them, and if logan was able to track him down, the head of one of the big four sure can too.
This was the stupidest, most idiotic chapter of any story I have ever read before. So basically she loses her ability and these kids are suprised that their going to targeted? Like what the hell where you expecting?! It seems that the smartest person in this whole story couldn't plan anything better, than a plan that a couple twelve year olds from Disney channel could have pulled off! If your going to write something like an escape plan, at least make it noteworthy đ Logan could have hacked the bracelet of one of the targets,and made the transmission come off of Fex. The teachers wouldn't have noticed the switch since they seemed to disappear shortly after the announcement. When in the office Verdon would have appeared after they made everyone "sleep" gagged Jack's mouth and let Fex influence him to either give back the abilities or before that just forget about taking their abilities and order him to go home. Jack would have no issues and he would have left no problem and this whole issue would have been handle. Hell even simpler! Mr Blade could have "asked" him to ignore the other two and none of this would have occured. Obviously everyone in the story is a moron that believes fighting is the only way to solve anything.,but just pulls them into more trouble.