So instead of leveling up so his prepared to face the Vampire leaders he decides to ditch the game (-_-) And don't talk to me about him not having enough time, with each level that it goes up, the more exp he can get. I'd have spent an hour in there

A kid who created an advanced VR technology and has developed super nanotechnology, but still managed to come up with a such a stupid plan? I don't think so -_-

I'm so ready to ditch the story after ready this chapter

A special trip to my Fellow offer. The basis of a story like this, where the characters have to get out of sticky situations is good as a premise. However, for it to be interesting it has to balance between believable and fascinating. This chapter was not believable because this plan was formulated by our school guinness himself. The plan was clumsy at best and had to many flows to come from someone of such intellect. Unless this is all part of some larger scheme it doesn't look to good for the characters. This would have been a good opportunity to for us to better connect and understand Logan as a new character.

This was the stupidest, most idiotic chapter of any story I have ever read before. So basically she loses her ability and these kids are suprised that their going to targeted? Like what the hell where you expecting?! It seems that the smartest person in this whole story couldn't plan anything better, than a plan that a couple twelve year olds from Disney channel could have pulled off! If your going to write something like an escape plan, at least make it noteworthy 😑 Logan could have hacked the bracelet of one of the targets,and made the transmission come off of Fex. The teachers wouldn't have noticed the switch since they seemed to disappear shortly after the announcement. When in the office Verdon would have appeared after they made everyone "sleep" gagged Jack's mouth and let Fex influence him to either give back the abilities or before that just forget about taking their abilities and order him to go home. Jack would have no issues and he would have left no problem and this whole issue would have been handle. Hell even simpler! Mr Blade could have "asked" him to ignore the other two and none of this would have occured. Obviously everyone in the story is a moron that believes fighting is the only way to solve anything.,but just pulls them into more trouble.

My thoughts exactly. Security everywhere expect the one place it's needed most?

oh yah. that's what I thought too. I can't remember his name but they called him GeeHole right? I had so much hope for him at the start. Now his just some crazy bastard I'm the Pen

Ah that magnificent moment you have no coins to continue the story.and stare blankly at the unreadable next chapter.