Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

I find this response to the situation by Layla amazingly realistic I mean if I was her that is exactly what I would do as well

I don’t know if this was intentional but I got the feeling she thought this was some twilight bullcràp

Love interest unlocked what answer shall you choose > Nope, nope and nope are you crazy > Yes, if you don’t tell anyone about my secret.... and maybe become my cattle cough cough > Just why? Thx for the chap

Wth. This is forcefully plot

It's also kinda interesting that he doesn't care that she essentially stalked him

. . . Author I have tried SO HARD to stand up for this novel and defend you but you have destroyed the last of my patience. This decision is dumb and retarded I am dropping this novel. It has become awful

Well the stalking part is explained, she is just screwed in her mind.

Ok now both of them are retarded

So..her name actually bella..

So far this as been nothing amazing, slightly bad even, but this response is 10/10!

Shes not crazy shes just interested in becoming stonger faster and importal. A lot of people wants or likes the idea of being a vampire of some kinda mythical creature.

I think you need some more proofreading for your writing, brother. Grammatical errors take me out of your story, and it's not a very gripping story in the first place. I'll stick with it for now, hopefully there'll be some improvement.

Lol. Typical girl fantasy. just too funny.

Yeah, because being the only doctor in a military school were every student gets hurt in bloody infighting is a lonely job. There is nobody in the infirmary to talk to and she doesn't have anything to do. (Heavy sarcasm) If i was her, i would know all the gossip in the school. Who is fighting who, why and how. I'd talk with every student who gets there and ask how their fights went. And then i would have an information guild that would sell the info of weakness, powers, rumors, alliances, etc in exchange for favors. It would be great because i would have a deal with the heads of the school, telling them which students have potential, who seems to be hiding things, and if there seems to be a spy of some other camp.

If he can make others into vampires I’m dropping

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exp😁

nice chap👍

thanks for the chapter