Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Why is Layla is such a busybody. I hope she is not the heroine. And such a cliche. They met again at the convenience store. What coincidence

Please remove the female stalker... If she turns into his gf it's even worse

Layla is fückīng OP. She’s literally everywhere. Such Plot Armor. 🥴🥴 Kinda annoying tbh.

I’m sure your story will get better considering it’s ranking, but at the moment it’s a little slow. I think the reason many people are not liking the story at the moment is because they are frustrated at how long it’s taking to actually get started. When they started reading this story they expected a story about a vampire which is a very cool premise. They are just waiting for him to finally find out what his system is, and until then they aren’t reading the story they wanted. To take so many chapters to start a story weighs on the patience of others especially when their is seemingly no reason to do so. You have inserted countless opportunities to reveal to the MC what his system is, and have repeatedly ignored them as if taunting the reader, and it feels forced. You are stretching and delaying the revelation for no reason and that makes many readers hate you. They just want to read a good story, but you are preventing them. You could have had the exact same arc and events with him knowing what the system was, and people would enjoy it. I would have dropped this story long ago if not for its high ranking and the trust that it will get better. Don’t take this the wrong way I’m sure you’re a great author, but I just want you to understand what people are thinking when they criticize your story.

Layla is annoying just kill her off fck im done with this book the flow and event feel akward to me like the pacing .

What the- Author you are really starting to push it, wait you know what? You already pushed it, it fell off a cliff. This whole Layla thing is way too forced. 🤦‍♂️

Love the story but Layla feels very forced and is already giving creep vibes like how does she magically appear up this dude's ass no matter where he goes overall like the setting so far

The fact hes wearing a mask is a bad cliche and there’s no point like geez this story was good until mc had the idea to be like hey im gonna be a retard and hide my identity even though i have the power to beat people up that provoke me

Bruhhh Layla is the literal definition of a forced barely written character. Like what the hell?!?! least you could do is take 2 seconds to think what you're doing wrong. Oh well there's a reason this is number 1 guess I'll keep reading.

Layla is an actual creep like fr f*ck outta here *****.

Bro get this stalker of his back.

show time indeed ...hmmm

hahaha lol layla she have so may time to follow mc even at evening how did she know mc is leaving in his room?

Layla being in the convi was too much of a coincidence

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thanks for the chapter

I don't know why exactly this novel is number 1 but I'll give it 50 chapters