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Comments of chapter undefined of Divinity: Against the Godly System

Talon_Willard
Talon_WillardLv4Talon_Willard

Flawed

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Laizht
LaizhtLv15Laizht

I'd say flawed but improving to perfection, but please... don't make him a dense MC (even if he isn't powerful yet, make him intelligent) :P

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Streaf
StreafLv5Streaf

Flawed Is ok but not make It idiot or dense

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Inversedeath
InversedeathLv15Inversedeath

Flawed that grows in to a perfect mc

NewManagement
NewManagementLv5NewManagement

Not perfect but not an idiot. It’s horrible to see something that everyone knows he should know. Can’t have him be great one minute and a tool the next. It’s irritating. He should learn as he goes and learn from mistakes but not the wtf is he an idiot type stuff. You learn from your mistakes but if he pisses on an electric fence and acts surprised... dropping

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Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4Bird_0f_Hermes

Flawed, but please don't make him make mistakes that even my 5 year old cousin wouldn't. And everyone likes character growth so getting better will definitely suit peoples taste.

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rbborri
rbborriLv5rbborri

Flawed, but not stupid, MC.

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Dionys
DionysLv5Dionys

Flawed in power, have him taste some defeats but make him smart.

Relhak
RelhakLv12Relhak

Flawed is OK as it adds humanity - but please avoid cliche stuff like dense and idiot MC, especially low EQ MC's. Important thing is that their quirks shouldn't be frustrating and shouldn't be the main plot driver.

naya_walker
naya_walkerLv12naya_walker

keep him how he is

Equinox_D
Equinox_DLv13Equinox_D

Flaw to Perfection

con_dar
con_darLv15con_dar

flawed but in a good way like doing something bad for good reasons

Sambingereader
SambingereaderLv2Sambingereader

a perfet mc does not exist as you the author is not perfect....anyway if the mc is a human then well you have your answer...there's no perfect human being

woofanator
woofanatorLv13woofanator

Flawed, but dont make him dense and stupid

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

Flawed but not dense can't stand mc like that

Dragozard
DragozardLv2Dragozard

flawed, perfects not that fun

RoyalPain1777
RoyalPain1777Lv15RoyalPain1777

in writing its good to have a flawed Mc, because of this thing called CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT

con_dar
con_darLv15con_dar

flawed but in a good way like doing something bad for good reasons

zedroid
zedroidLv14zedroid

flawed

AsunaKaoru
AsunaKaoruLv12AsunaKaoru

Uno perfecto

Oluchi_Luchis
Oluchi_LuchisLv2Oluchi_Luchis

Perfect