Academy arc alright, but...
WRONG ACADEMY!! TT
But I also kind of wonder how Frey and Thomas will do without their brain 🤔
Could make for some good growth
Here is one great and free lecture from Brandon Sanderson in youtube (you can search for "Brandon Sanderson lecture" as well).
watch?v=-6HOdHEeosc&list=PLSH_xM-KC3Zv-79sVZTTj-YA6IAqh8qeQ
Hope to be of help to any new and aspiring authors or ... anyone with interest in this topic.
Great end of the arc.
I think this chapter is the proper end, as it’s a complete and tied initiation with open end for contiunuation - just like how most tv series are finished with “to be continue...” end.
That teeth thing really got me. I expected him to say how he would do something twisted and brutal with an even more twisted smile but he just said it like a joke. Reminds me of Handsome Jack from Borderlands.
ah so doevm who just wanted to learn martial arts is suddenly ripped and stuck learning magic. well i used to like this novel but not anymore rip a fan I'm gone.