That teeth thing really got me. I expected him to say how he would do something twisted and brutal with an even more twisted smile but he just said it like a joke. Reminds me of Handsome Jack from Borderlands.
Academy arc alright, but...
WRONG ACADEMY!! TT
But I also kind of wonder how Frey and Thomas will do without their brain 🤔
Could make for some good growth
Here is one great and free lecture from Brandon Sanderson in youtube (you can search for "Brandon Sanderson lecture" as well).
watch?v=-6HOdHEeosc&list=PLSH_xM-KC3Zv-79sVZTTj-YA6IAqh8qeQ
Hope to be of help to any new and aspiring authors or ... anyone with interest in this topic.
Great end of the arc.
I think this chapter is the proper end, as it’s a complete and tied initiation with open end for contiunuation - just like how most tv series are finished with “to be continue...” end.
ah so doevm who just wanted to learn martial arts is suddenly ripped and stuck learning magic. well i used to like this novel but not anymore rip a fan I'm gone.