Comments of chapter undefined of A Bored Lich

Glad to have the weird, secret, bullshit between Doevm and Frey over with.

My favorite part was the "Berserker" ritual and “lich” and “human” talking. Also the very start of the arc with the banter between the characters. My least favorite was everything to do with the villain group. I get the technicalities and the part of masks hiding identity, but this is still a school initiation it should be more controlled and overseen that what it is. This mass killing should have huge ramifications that I fear will not happen. Still thanks for the chapter 😄 Keep up the good work 👍

I liked that the secret thing between Doevm and Frey is over. What I don't like is Thomas not even doubting Jackal and the rest when he just met them, while he had gone through life and death situation with Elero, but he doesn't even trusts what she warned him about.

Zombie Thomas. That's a hilarious thought now that I think of it.

I liked the arc, though it was not my favorite. my favorite fat was when doevm told Frey that he was a lich, my least favorite part was doevm resurrecting Tomas, it just seemed forced and did not need to happen though I like his character. As a whole in excited to see where the story will go from here.

I really enjoyed the arc (and the novel in general). So please keep up the good work, author, and please better take a break now than let us hang off a cliff later in the story! 😖

To the author: minor grammer correction, re-read the sentence about the bead of sweat, I'm pretty sure you mean to say "travelled" instead of "to travel." Great story; I'm new on the site and have given you every power stone I have ❤️

Oh, I will let you know, so brace for the impact... but will be when I’m on my computer. The White Throne is for reading only and uncomfortable for long replies.

I really like how you talk with your readers making good use of the end card

just wait til his father finds out his son came home as an undead

thanks

I really enjoyed the arc. Even the point system didn't feel bad. I hate Thomas's childish and trusting mind, but I believe it's intentional and growable. Maybe he didn't have enough darker experiences or betrayals to build a suspicious mind, or maybe reading Doevm's perspective is getting onto me...

It made me a bit sad when that trak guy got just ganked in the beginning. seemed kinda interesting character

Loved the chapter