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Falling For Mr. Detective

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anyajhayag
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you should use a proper pronoun to represent your young man, do not always start your sentence with the young, or me k, you can use he instead because it's getting too boring to always read 'the young man's in the beginning of your sentence.

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Gldseya
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Thank you for the suggestion ๐Ÿ˜Š

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gab_29
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interesting๐Ÿ˜„

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interesting!!

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a curious secret

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i get more information on the front of chapter.. i love the words for the entered story' begin. that make me more curious and wanting to read.. more

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Mmmmm

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Interesting

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interesting indeed๐Ÿ‘

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