you should use a proper pronoun to represent your young man, do not always start your sentence with the young, or me k, you can use he instead because it's getting too boring to always read 'the young man's in the beginning of your sentence.
The "Nadia" in the story has all the spoils,, at least give her a bit difficult task to attend to and more on character development not just focus on good appearance of the female/male leads.