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Comments of chapter undefined of Playing One Piece

Ather47
Ather47Lv7Ather47

Mc beign too passive

Kurookami
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Fanfictions need to live up to change history, not to repeat it completely.

ConfusedZombie:The thing is if he is too active, things will change and what he can remember will not be worth it. Have you ever heard of the butterfly effect theory? A small flutter of a butterflies wings in the amazon causes tornados in Ohio. Something along those lines. He changes stuff, stuff changes.
Alpha_Ace
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Ivan_Accosano
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I don't think that the mc is being too passive, how would he be more active in this chapter? Going straight to beating arlong? That was a hard fight with the entirety of the strawhats and the mc is alone now

Zokins_Play
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Grazie per il capitolo. ಠ‿ಠ

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

SDragom
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Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍

Jailing
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Thank you for the chapter!

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IndigoFox
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So a while back I found a fanfiction author that explained the six powers and the devil fruit powers so well that I thought they were real for a sec what I ask is that you read the first 2 chapters of that story and if you dont get inspired or something you bash me but give it a chance https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12860908/1/One-Piece-Mad-World "Rokushiki?" "Also referred to as the Six Powers. They aren't actually powers, more like very specialized martial arts. Popularized by the Cipher Pol guys since they needed a way to weaponized themselves without actually carrying around weapons. Eventually, it bleed through to the Marine Corps. Now, you can't make Admiral without knowing them and Haki – keeps the ones without conviction out of the higher ranks with justifiable reason." Luffy nodded his head, "So that's what they are. You just always tell the guys what power to work on without ever explaining to them as to how to do it. I only figured how to do three of them." Garp raised a brow, "Geppo, Tekkai, and Soru?" Luffy nodded. "Expected – those are the basic three." Garp gathered his thoughts, "The reason you didn't hear their explanation is because the training for them is considered top-secret. To avoid pirates and possible infiltrators of getting their hands on these techniques, they are only taught by word-of-mouth. I gathered all the people who had potential in a locked room and told them the basis of all techniques ONCE. After that, they are on their own – I tell them the mistakes they make, but that is it. The only reason you – unlike others - managed to figure out the basis for three of them is because you watched them practice, especially since they are taught not to write notes about it."

anzafay21
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Thanks for the chapter! Keep up the amazing work absurd

Bra_d
Bra_dLv1Bra_d

I really hate how he wants to keep stealing luffys fight you say after the skypeia arc u want to make him leave and write your own stuff but you cant even make OC's for him to fight now instead of stealing luffys fights, and him leaving after being with them for so long would make him a back stabbing traitor.

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

mc changing the timeline already... luffy defeating arlong and destroying the castle and him appearing out of the ruins and declaring nami as nakama was great since it made nami cry and join him.. but how would mc do things then?

Gorath13
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I get that he prefers to fight with his fists but the decision to not buy a good sword for himself and "allow" Zoro to be the sword guy doesn't sit right with me. One crew can have more than one swordsmen he just doesn't have to the best at it but he can be great! Shanks and Rayleigh aren't known for their swordsmanship yet the both are powerful swordsmen. So please allow the MC to get a good sword and level up his skill there too.

Bra_d
Bra_dLv1Bra_d

I really hope he dosnt fight arlong if he dose luffy is gonna be so weak, how is he gonna get stronger if you beat up all the top villains. Luffy might as well not be the captain and you should have stole his crew mates before he did and become the captain yourself.

Eleesar_Talcontar
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thanks for the chapter!!

Ell_LeFant
Ell_LeFantLv11Ell_LeFant

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

AvidReader962
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Thanks for the chapter

DreamCrusher101
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He's wasting so much oppurtunity just for the plot and even dream of being the strongest if the only way for him to get stronger is to defeat opponents and his just giving it aways for the straw hat People of your reading this comment dont continue dont be blinded buy the ranking this is bull****

sleepingontheshore
sleepingontheshoreLv3sleepingontheshore

i dont really know why was he doing this, was he interested in nami, or something, he could just beat the **** out of all the fishermen infront of her, and he wouldnt have to go through this all

Pork
PorkLv12Pork

At this rate luffy will be to weak to fight enel

Koooomakimi
KoooomakimiLv10Koooomakimi

i rlly hope the mc finds a weapon later in the book