Comments of chapter undefined of The Spider Queen

In my opinion (worth its weight in helium) the Hybrid war seems a little too early. There needs to be more development of the school and relationships to have a proper war. Cleo and Sophie need more trust so you can do crazy stuff with Cleo and their relationship. Maybe have them become well known pirate hunters. Maybe build a relationship with them where they learn about how pirates are dissapearing and do some investigation. Stuff like that.

Another chapter will be posted later today to make up for missing an upload yesterday :)

cleo is slowly being tamed so much for her harem plan she originally had. she found Sophia and can't even keep up poor girl.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

So much for 'Cleo's infamous death stare'. Sophie's brutal.

This pirate arc, are we gonna make some up and coming pirate or maybe marine contacts? Pirates would be good for operating in the grey area of society which she might have to if she ever meets mom, and Marines would be good not only for reliable backup but also experience and possibly covering up some stuff.

Thanks for the chapter Author!

Thank you for all your hard work

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thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter !🕷🕸👸🏼

You could use the pirate war arc to gradually lay the foundations for hybrid-humansupremacits war arc. After that an arc in insectoid territory.

GAH! ROUGE IS A COLOR!!! Why do people always put ROUGE when the ROGUE is the word they’re looking for? IT BOTHERS ME SO MUCH. Rogue is a thief, rouge is a color

I see that Cleo has no chance at being top 😆

Sophie and Cleo 😊😊😊💕💕💕💕🥰🥰🥰

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Darius? The space pirate Darius? From tft?