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good chapter and interesing turn of event and pov compared to other fic. loved the political fall and logical sacking on ria gremory and the pov of the less than gentle being they portray them to be on devil , quite refreshing. i have no doubt issei will take some damage too hope MC will get some good ally soon lol
Thanks for the chapter! I guess our MC had some dealings with Joan of Arc in his time with all the Heroes, so what will the meeting between him and Jeanne be like, I wonder? And what will happen to Momo, now with his bounded field, when she comes to see him? I really hope they will NOT become enemies! I'm hoping for some romance between our MC and Momo!
You know, I see that you're actually making this chapter serious and all, but you kind of missed a big glaring point. If this town was so important, why would the devil RACE give a couple of teens with attitude a town? (Assuming Sirzech and the Serafall l let them, what about the other pillar head?) You orchestrated a really good plot, but you're also underplaying the devil faction too much. Sirzech is one of the STRONGEST characters in the world. He might not be top 10, but definitey top 100. If the devils let Rias and Sona play with a town, I'm assuming they can handle any mistake those two make. After the Azazel incident in cannon, I'm pretty sure that the devils have a lot of behind the scenes power with contracts. Probably public figures and more. Either way though, I still think your chapter is great! You definitely nerfed the devil's influence for some reason, but I wanna see what you decide to do!