Comments of chapter undefined of Death Guns In Another World
Death Guns In Another World
Nickaido
Chapter comments36
Till this chapter It's all still really generic here like other Japanese isekai novel(earlier releases) but with better MC... The dialogue and monologue is really looks like inspired by anime or Japanese translated story so a bit cringe... Like I said the MC is better than other Japanese novel... The love interest? I can't get attached to her (them) and many people already said they hate her... Because you didn't made their relationship deeper or made her care toward the MC, you can said that "but she care toward the MC and trust him he can do it and become better", but that's not what many of the reader perceive, we only read and imagine the action you wrote, not your intention... So in conclusion, till this chapter the story is still boring, not enough emotion given to the reader... What I felt is only annoyance and frustration with Leonardo Guy, The princess, the situations, and the Girl.. I don't feeling any sadness, any love, or any other emotions here... If I can give some tips remember that a story need to tell emotion and made the reader feel the emotion... A simple way, wishfullfillment story gave the reader a sense of excitement of OP MC or conquering girl, many can said that harem Story with OP MC is bad, but for it's target audiences, they got what they want, they get what emotion they want to feel from reading the story... Or drama story, it's audience can feel the emotion they like to feel when following the story...
Dropping here. Its boring and it doesnt look like like its gonna be picking up anytime soon might pick up again but its doubful ill prob forget it ever existed or ill remember but the author would have dropped it and then i couldnt be bothered to waste my time on a dropped story. It happens all the time with all the ****ty stories on this site.
hey man, I was attracted by the cover(yea, I'm a gunpowder dude XD) and decides to give a read. I'm not a pro reviewer, just someone who's reading webnovels for a while. I must say that at prologue(1-8), this title certainly falls under the generic isekai theme. But the way you introduced the MC's character, main female lead and the "Dodo gang" makes me want to keep reading to see how Alex will grow. Well, after making such a refreshing savage retort, it made me wonder more on what Alex's thinking since regular folks wouldn't recklessly do that XD World lore and building(flora,fauna and regional politics) will be critical here to add colors to the novel and make itself distinct from the "mass produced isekai themed works". So I'll see how you unfold it from here :) P.s Tbh, I can already see the haughty princess's shallow character the moment she open her lips. So actually I understand why Alex mercilessly insults her back, since these shallow people *will* find trouble sooner or later regardless just because they can. Alex gotta back up his big insult with actual power tho, so its another avenue I took interest to XD
For me, this story still unclear how the character can gain exp and level up because from the story it show that the others have level up except MC. So how other can get increase in attribute and how other can level up. Look like even mc do a lot of reading and exercise from that action it suppose can get an exp or at least increase in attribute, but with all that, it still didn't amount to anything. MC still didnt gain anything but the other get something just attend the class and practice. Hope this can be clear
