Comments of chapter undefined of Kung Fu Beyond the World
Kung Fu Beyond the World
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Am I first reader I wonder? Well so far, not bad writing, but quite a few awkward phrases used, and quite full of cliches (background, world building). If there are arrogant young masters around every corner, I'll probably have to skip this. Also why use 'Kung Fu'? Normally everyone uses 'martial arts' instead. This amongst other things confuses me slightly. Is this a translation or original? Well anyway this is the first chapter, so lets see how it goes.
