DAFR
And i'm out of here, my problems with the wishes are. 1- If you do not have your past life memories you are not yourself but an entirely different person because your memories is what makes you you, so in my opinion you just made a wish that another person will use and not you. 2- We'll have a dense mc because he won't be able to recognize his own emotion and the emotion of others. 3- Really? You need someone else motivation for training because you don't have your own? So yeah i'm out of here
MC must be a masochist or hated who he was maybe he was already pretty much dense anyway so nothing changed. You don’t need to be tony stark smart most wizards are stupid and let’s just say here they are not his lack of EQ will hinder him more than having low IQ as he could just improve that with occulemency,rituals, artifacts, and lifestyle choices. Most retarded thing he wished for was eidetic memory when he can just occulemency or use artifact for that that. Losing his life experiences basically cripples him and makes him a slightly special OC of the universe You don’t need to work that hard when most wizards are lazy but ok let’s say MC is complete loser and can’t motivate himself in a fantasy world. Why would you cut you figuratively cut your own dick off just so you can have excessive training mentality unless it’s cultivation world not even worth mentioning. He could have hypnotized or brainwashed himself so stupid tbh makes people not read but hopefully it’s not too much of a waste and their are interesting situations.
have to say of all wishes in fanfic . You get prize of being the dumbest I have ever scene. Wasting 3 wishes like that and not even keeping your memory plus ,lees hard-work in magic world seriously . It would have been better if you would not have gone with wish part because yes you blew it in very first chapter. I hope you make Mc good because believe it or not most people will drop after reading 1 chapter .
I think the author didnt want to flesh out romance so he just nipped that in the bud with making him socially retarded whats the point of being powerful in the end if you have no one worth protecting you cant just say he will protect his friends if he even has any because that just makes him a background character of the world at large not even the mc of his own story
really sucks to have a dense mc and with no memories of his past life other than the harry potter books does that mean that he will be be harry potter or just like a blank slate not knowing who he is other than being harry potter really and have no personality to really grow from since he already knows all about the books and movies.
First wish is semi understandable but not really needed if he knows about the HP world. Second wish is a waste because he already has something for his knowledge - that being his Eidetic Memory. Third wish was a bit foolish, why would you ask for enthusiasm? That's almost tantamount to wishing for motivation.
Eidetic memory can actually kill a person because the brain are ment to forget memory so the brain doesn't have an break down by the overwhelming sensual input from our five sense and also if you have a traumatic experience you can overcome it by simply forgetting it or having lost interest in that memory.
Sigh, well this MC waisted all his wish on silly things. Keeping his memory would've brought him better advantage then selling it all for thing he could have work in attaining with magic or trainning. Still this does bring a new soul perspective, or course him being a emotional idiot will be a huge weakness in my personal opinion. Thanks for the story.