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Comments of chapter undefined of Omega Summoner

CassTheEevee
CassTheEeveeLv14CassTheEevee

I already dont like the parents, they fuckin limited their sons ability to walk, thats disgusting

Arun_Kumar_4774
Arun_Kumar_4774Lv12Arun_Kumar_4774

good

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clarence_lake
clarence_lakeLv4clarence_lake

i need two people to like my comment please 😭

Mihu_Claudia_8291
Mihu_Claudia_8291Lv4Mihu_Claudia_8291

good job[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] | have a cat

DattaRaviTeja
DattaRaviTejaLv11DattaRaviTeja

Did the author mess up the timeline?? 1. One and half years ago- accident. 2. Two years ago- game released. 3. Six months after accident- AC announced the release of the game. ????????? Or is it just me not understanding properly?

Satorian
SatorianLv12Satorian

Can someone explain to me how “punctuation could use some work” seems to be the biggest critique anyone has posted for this? The only paragraphs of this chapter that don’t have some kind of problem are the game loading/start lines at the end. The complete lack of commas in this chapter isn’t the only problem here; there’s also bad sentence structure, no use of contractions, mistakes with tenses, and a few instances of poor word choice. I really hope this dramatically improves in the next couple of chapters, since the premise is really interesting.

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Jacek2305
Jacek2305Lv4Jacek2305

That's possible? He "forgot the feeling of using his legs"

Whiteflash
WhiteflashLv15Whiteflash

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

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Bryan_Nkondem_7233
Bryan_Nkondem_7233Lv1Bryan_Nkondem_7233

Great book

Laude_de_Castro
Laude_de_CastroLv11Laude_de_Castro

Nice.....

Quadra_Aira
Quadra_AiraLv3Quadra_Aira

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Remhallow
RemhallowLv1Remhallow

heard about this story from a friend and so far not disappointed.

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Sam0207
Sam0207Lv4Sam0207

Hmm, the phrasing and grammar could use some work. And god, you need punctuations. Otherwise it's good.

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Bachchu_Miah
Bachchu_MiahLv1Bachchu_Miah

Good job

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reynaldo_camacho
reynaldo_camachoLv4reynaldo_camacho

Thanks for the chapter.

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alex_chi
alex_chiLv2alex_chi

Thanks

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IntoTheExpanse
IntoTheExpanseLv15IntoTheExpanse

@XiaoKongxu Let the journey begin!

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VaresXIV
VaresXIVLv1VaresXIV

the parents are sus

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Soloranker1
Soloranker1Lv3Soloranker1

super good

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ChipsKoi
ChipsKoiLv1ChipsKoi

There are some rlly minor errors in the writing which i suggest for author to fix to make it flow well

LordZeus777
LordZeus777Lv4LordZeus777

Welcome to omega summoner