Comments of chapter undefined of In the world of TDG as a Pokemon Master

MC pussy slave, 80 percent of the chapter was about which women he was after. Then he talked about sharing his powers and in the end he keeps saying everything out loud from what I saw from the restaurant. Honestly, a waste of my time.

so is this gonna be a harem novel with an mc that just randomly wants to share things with ppl he read about....good plot bad mc in my opinion

ummm bro, I hope this MC won't think with his d*ck like almost every fanfic

It's good so far but can you please limit the self monologue. It's better to explain things via actions rather than monologue.

Already can predict the future of this novel will be full of drama of the women in harem with no good action and adventure. Guess i'm gonna drop it now. And for all harem lover with no real power to get harem, please stop making your right & left hand as your wifes in harem fantasy hahahaha get laid for real amigos

The plot is good but you seem hate nie lie with the reason that not nie lie character in the original, and honestly nie lie is better compared too your mc, sorry for bad English.

Great chapter ,, I like this mc thinking 🤣🤣🤣 get all of them

It like his saying that they are already his wives. Kinda arrogant if I do say so myself.

Didn't even explained what benefits his cultivation technique gives him wew

Great so far! Ignore the children who're spreading hate, they're simply jealous that you wrote something better than they could.

a lot of just telling and not showing felt like i just read a laundry list of a horny teenager

So he went from being conscious of the fact people with higher cultivations can hear what he's self monologueing to himself, which would put him in a disadvantageous position. Then immediately decides to articulate all of his thoughts for seemingly no reason other then maybe to provide conflict. 🤔

i didnt even read the first three chapters and happened to notice the fourth paragraph from the bottom and im like da ****?! the whole gimmick of this novel is that the MC has an advantage over others by being a "Pokemon Master" and this entire paragraph demolishes any advantage the MC has over anyone else, not to mention the fact that it ties the MC's Personality with every other generic protagonist personality a chinese man has created 'i cant be assed to check but im assuming hes chinese' the fact that he says "I also need" instead of "I could also" tells me the MC is a generic MC with the personality of a desperate ***** boy who wants to get rid of his virgin status 'I could be wrong though and I know im probably going to be just another addition to the rants on this chapter, like "alexandroo" but i am aware im not a prophet and cant foretell the future of this novel. But i can predict, and predict I shall. This MC will have no character development and the MC will not become selfish in any way or focus more on himself rather than his "Wives" The MC will stay as a desperate person and all the females will continue to exploit his personality and there may even be some chinese racism like in the novel "Legend of the Mythological Genes" sigh another novel with potential 'in my opinion' ruined

those are some great women to choose from. guess him always wanting a family and adding the women will make it a big one. keep up the good work.

The character does not match with the one on earth.

yang xin best girl

Hablo de tener miedo a la muerte, que quiere vivir tranquilo y feliz y después de 3 minutos piensa en matar a Nie Li. No entiendo y dejó este vago intento de historia

1. You say you are going to have all girls great 2. Then you say you are going to even kill Nie lie . I say very good . 90% of people who read TDG fan fic don’t like that bitch. 3. Then you go straight lame. So you are saying he can’t even reach bronze rank till start of story. Now why would you not even give him a cultivation advantage.

go open that treasure tomb