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Comments of chapter undefined of Life of Debauchery with Harem of Goddesses

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Krishna_Verma_7291
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continue, story is not bad

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Maverick11
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It would be interesting to restart this one while replanifying the whole plot. or just take a break , rethink the story and continue on this one.

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Adharsh_Varma
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continue bro this is one of favorite novel😁😁

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what_not
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this is easily my favourite novel right now and it would be a shame if it just ended so abruptly I, there is a lot more character development need and story elements that could be expanded on to make the novel truly gread, I think you should continue

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Samuels_Joseph
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continue please

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steeepppppddaaaddd
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this novel is perfect bro. please continue

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ExaizT
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Please continue with this novel its very exciting

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Cury_miles
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Please continue with this novel its very exciting

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gmanno99
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i think a rewirte will help but in the end it is up to you and what you want to do as the wirter of the story

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Maradilue
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Continue

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Kazumayagami
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New novel similar to how you were writing your H.S.O.T.D fanfic…

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Sanjay_Beniwal
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this is your book so you should decide whether you want to continue or not based on your physical health and mental health but if there there is no issue than I personally would like this book to continue but it's up to you. and thank for this book

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Loli_tyan
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Continue

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ReF4SH
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It’s a good book. Simple yet exhilarating but I do sense a lot of loose ends.. Like there are too many mysteries which would require an arc to be understandable to us. So I do understand when u say there is lot on cards. Ig u could rewrite this one by simplygying it a bit...You could also continue this one if you like but then u have to wrap up many parts in a simple fashion.

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Daoist162726
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continue

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LegendryNovelCrazy
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As you said, you are writing this story for fun, if you don't want to continue, you can start to a new story. If you want to continue, I think you should review the story and think about how you want to continue.

B1uKnight
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Contiune please, this is easily one of my most favorite and entertaining novels for me.

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egg_tart
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I think you should do what you want. This was good but I can see that some areas of the story were outside of your comfort zone. If you write another story you could consider writing a fanfic so you have less to think about and really just focus on the characters and relationships. This was really fun to read and for a first novel(?) this is quite good.

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DevilzPride
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you could start from the beginning again and make the plot the you envisioned it the first place it gives you that satisfaction that your novel is where you want it to be and not just half heartedly done if you get what I mean. SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS 😁👍

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God_of_War_Games
God_of_War_GamesLv14God_of_War_Games

soo one of the thing in the novel I don't get is the fact that the women he as s*x with other than the 12001 girls don't make a big deal about the fact that if he has sexton with the they don't lose there cultivation..