Comments of chapter undefined of The Tyrant Gentle Husband
The Tyrant Gentle Husband
Hana_Frederica
Chapter comments12
Story is interesting but it doesn’t match what was written previously so I’m confuse with a lot of things. From earlier chapters, it was said that she transmigrated into Elena’s body. So therefore, she should not be feeling any sort of romantic feelings or any feelings at all towards Luke. My impression was that she didn’t care for him and thought that he was a bad male lead. So what she should be showing is disinterest, aloofness, maybe even hate but not love. I sorta get why she still has her relationship with her younger brothers but it shouldn’t be too strong. I just thought that (her relationship with her younger brothers) would have been great opportunity for some major character development. But from what I’ve read so far, she just accepted it willy nilly.
I love the story idea and the characters. I noticed dear author that you wrote about Elena before she transmigrated here in this chapter. Here she read the novel over and over again and was in love with Luke in a way. But what was written in the first few chapters of your story, Elena read a dog blood novel one time and was understandably disappointed with the ending . Then she transmigrated into the tragic position of the CEOs wife. Either one if these scenarios is fine. I just suggest that if you now decide that she is in love with Luke and reading the novel over and over, you edit the begining in spots to match. This way the story is consistent and realistic. It is normal that you change your mind. Stories morph on their own so having to edit previous scenes so everything matches is natural. I only write this because I find your story charming and just a few things could clear up the vague areas that distract from the loveliness of your work. ok just a suggestion that's all. I look forward to reading more. thank you for your hard work.
