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Say goodbye to the autumn birds

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    tmk_ing1yr
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    A lot of ‘ I did this, I did that, he did this, he did that’. Too much telling. Need more showing. Story progress is really really sonic fast. Hope it slows down soon.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    tmk_ing1yr
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    I’m assuming mc is from the modern world if he knows about Naruto. But how did he go from modern thinking to straight up being okay with killing anyone standing in his way? Unless he already was a psychotic murder in modern times I don’t see how that’ll happen. Just because you transmigrated or reincarnated or whatever doesn’t mean your values and ideals automatically changes. Even with Naruto’s memories, the children are not born killers. They all just become desensitized to the act of killing. I’ll get it if mc starts disregarding lives later on in the story—I mean it is the world of Naruto where practically deaths and murder is a regular—but as soon as he transmigrated into Naruto’s body? No. Just no.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    tmk_ing1yr
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    Still don’t know why he is a Jonin instructor. Konoha must be out of choices if they picked him. Not even sure the original body was even a jonin. And even if he was, wouldn’t someone have picked up that he’s different? My main put off is how is this normie going to train genins with no practical knowledge. Fake it till you make it?

    Ch 4 Ch 4 : Team 6
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    tmk_ing1yr
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    Uh….I know he couldn’t really choose any of the main characters but why Sakura? Almost everyone hates Sakura. I would rather prefer an OC over Sakura anytime but I’ll see how it goes from here.

    Ch 2 Ch 2 : Kaedehara Sanada
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Not sure how you’ll make tsunade the love interest after all the things done towards him and his family.

    Ch 24 24. A Place Of Our Own
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Lol I’m sorry but reading ‘three sword style’ always reminds me of luffy’s poor attempted of insulting zorro with ‘three sword style’

    Ch 147 Chapter 147
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Thank you for the update. Wonderful chapter as always. May I be so inconsiderate to ask for more? ^^

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    tmk_ing2yr
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    A king who’s incompetent and a crown prince who doesn’t know anything about politics or governing…no wonder the fa-whatever his name is is taking advantage of the dumb duo. Surprise the ‘wise’ king (princess’s father) is arranging for their union. Not so wise in my eyes. Maybe everyone is just dumb in this story lol

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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Hope her family meets a terrible end.

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    tmk_ing2yr
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    I’m sorry but Mimi’s gotta go. I find her annoying and I don’t think I can take much more of her annoying antics.

    Ch 35 I Will Stab You!
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Just wondering are you setting chiho up as her life partner? Or will you be introducing someone soon?

    Ch 26 Doing Things The Nagasawa Way!
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Not sure how she is as famous as famous actors/actresses. Sure gaming is an esport but it’s not big enough that everyone would be vying for autograph. Same as how not everyone knows or would want Michael Jackson’s (or any other big name celeb) autograph despite him being so famous. Think it’s just too far a reach even with this being fantasy lol but still enjoying the story nonetheless

    Ch 25 The Fan Blocking Chiho
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Sorry I’ve been bing reading and haven’t left any comments but just wanted to say thanks for all the chapters so far.

    Ch 49 Second Trial Completed
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Okay. Mary’s only been in like 2 chapters, but not gonna lie, my heart ached when she died. This is how you know that the author is doing a darn great job with their story. Ahhh you really broke my heart with killing Mary off. She was a great friend. Now Yuki will really be alone in life. Need more Princess

    Ch 21 Killing To Protect
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Good. For whatever reason I Thought it was going to be like opening a stall market but this is better lol

    Ch 17 Marketplace
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Would she need to disguise herself so that her game character won’t be notice especially later when she becomes much larger known? Will be an inconvenience if her recipe was to be stolen if others follow her around seeing what she collects etc. she’s the first to discover the usage of blue grass which is a common and just laying around everywhere.

    Ch 16 Potion Making 101
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    I’m really really looking forward to yuki and thes princess future encounters.

    Ch 14 President Chen
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Yuki talking back is quite different then what was portrayed in the beginning. It was said she stayed quiet not to offend the wrong people, turned a blind eye to injustice even though she wants to help so that she doesn’t get herself in trouble. Yet here, in this situation, I would have assume that she would have just stayed mute and moved to a different seat. But here she sassed back which is quite out of character. Not to mention her encounter with the princess from earlier. But all in all, I’m still enjoying the progress with how this story is turning out. Thank for sharing such a wonderful story.

    Ch 12 Annoying People
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    I just can’t help but be bothered that the uzumaki village is not in the seas surrounded by raging whirlpools. Or is this not Uzushiogakure? Also, I doubt a clan head will pay attention to the words of a 9-10 yr old genin. By off chance he does, I doubt he’ll strategize and decide the future of his clan’s fate off the words of a kid. If he does, maybe it’s better off that the Usumaki clan is killed off with that kind of leadership to begin with. As readers and fans of Naruto, we know the fate of the uzumaki so we aren’t too skeptical but as a character in the story who has no knowledge of the future he should take the words of a foreign genin with a grain of salt.

    Ch 45 Chapter 45: The Future of the Uzumaki Clan.
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    tmk_ing2yr
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    Forcing something unto the other party...I wouldn’t call that love. If you feel the urge to touch/kiss someone with or without their consent, it’s due to your sexual urges. You can love someone without forcing yourself on them. But all for the sake of plot, the other party, in this case, the female lead will ‘fall’ for the male lead despite these unwanted and unwarranted actions. Definitely won’t happen in real life, but story-wise, it happens all the time.

    Ch 2 I Miss You! Please Come Back!
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