Comments of chapter undefined of The Eternal Heart

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I want the next chapters

Another chapter

Where is the rest of the novel?

Next chapter please

Not that bad novel . In my opinion it got potential . But only when author dont use cliche thing too much and concentrate on mc character development from retard to a wise person who have gone from life experiences . Then will be this novel can get in good terms . Like mc shouldn't have won that tournament . Even with crystal heart help he could get 2nd place . His win in that tournament just ****ted on conept of natural talent and hardwork . It was like saying if u have external help u can **** on hardwork and natural talent who had done more hardwork than u .

Mc is like fool and insensitive man

I sincerely wish for this novel to not get selected. We have enough of trash novels. If this kind of novel gets selected again, I would start doubting whether the voting statistics are forged.

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