LamenThief
Have read a beginning of the story. I have a feeling that all characters didn't know each other until the story. They're suprise at the other characters reaction and decision like they expect something else. We have to believe that they all lived with each other can't predict what to expect? We have a cliche about father king and innocent price, who'll prove that he can be a good king. Boring, pathetic. Needs more action to hook readers mind.