Comments of chapter undefined of Ascenders Rift
Ascenders Rift
ShadowsFinger
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Aye Lord Shadow! I cant believe my eyes. No really! Never seen authors put out 3 chaps in a day ! You truly earned my admiration and I am madly hooked with your story . I dont know if you've noticed but I have been sending powerstones your way! Keep it up! I really can't wait for more! I just cant stop my desire for more chapters lol! No exaggeration!
Hmm things though seem to be getting a lot more complicated! Aye Rick that ladies man lmfao. He clearly likes Emilia , but poor susie is just the third wheel . I dont know if she will be sacrificed by RADA but she is certainly growing on me . As for michael and Nelia , they're not really my concern but shadow you shouldn't have given them white hair you know. I actually like the whole silver hair thing . Also , I've no idea why michael seems so intent on making trouble for evan and using his sister for that as well. I know all nobles have a sense of entitlement but Michael's sense of entitlement is way too extreme! Unless there is some past history this obsession seems a bit too artificial or forced . Its most likely connected to Evan helping Joe all the time i guess. I have never seen any nobles be that vain in the fiction I have read so far. Even rich people have a limit on their expectations when it comes to things being handed to them. t's like a typical arrogant young master from poorly written xianxia. Michael could become a sacrifice to RADA. The most likely thing I predict is michael will attack evan in the future to take away Joe's and emilia's support and Evan losing his patience with michael whom he considered simply petty until now will finish him off . Nelia heartbroken by this will either be used as a puppet of rada like michael or try to take revenge against evan in which case she will have a terrible ending as well . And the keller family bloodline will be as good as gone and through these events Evan will learn more about RADA and try to develop a counter attack plan which probably involves Lawson, the 2nd prince and his group. This is how I think things will play out from my rich experience in reading novels. While I won't claim that I have a full view of how the story is going to play out , do i have the right idea Author Shadow!!?
I am really hoping that some of the side characters either get development nor get lost (ik that sounds harsh). Currently Rick seems to have a very bland white-knight character and Breya has no character at all. I really really don't like the perfect white Knight characters so I am hoping that he might get some darker twists (cause he certainly isn't going down the humor path). I am liking Fatty, Evan, and Layla tho so good work😊😊.
You are forcing relationship between fatty, rick, Emilly and that other girl. First of all, it was shown that fatty's sister is in love with Evan so sudden change is stupid. More probable is situation with Susie. And why would that girl be interested in fatty? Just because of scene with bear? Another thing without sense.
