Comments of chapter undefined of MHA: Living as Mineta is hard

At this point in the story, even the original Mineta would be a better protagonist... I feel like the MC has become a Midoriya 2.0

Author, i think this guilt and all this abusive arc might've been a little too long.

These past chapters were kinda tedious my dude, 4/5 of the entire chapters were his inner monologue and his emotional turmoil and they don't even present anything new. It's all the same of how he's some tragic guy who got reborn into a dangerous world and is trying to defend his choice of being an absolute dumpster fire of a guy just because it gave him powers that he really doesn't need but as like all system users he is addicted for the gains, and now he's even starting to victimize himself by presenting himself as a lonely guy that's just missing his previous life and is all alone in this world. Like my dude, did he originally have so many traumas, emotional and psychological problems that it would literally just turn into a textbook on psychology? Or was he simply a drama club guy? Like fûçk dude, this is the most inner monologue and turmoil i have ever read and i don't even remember any others to compare AND IT HAS BEEN GOING SINCE FROM THE START? Are you like trying a new format in writing or something? Like something beyond the First Person Perspective and is over 90% the workings of his emotions and views on certain things?

Guilt, worries and All Might living rent free in his head.

Author, I wanted to scold you, but I will refrain this time. Anyway, I recommend you minimize the internal monologue and describe the world around Mineta instead of focusing on him and his thoughts alone. Even short sections of other character's thoughts would be better than all chapters being Mineta living inside his head.

thx

if u wanna avoid all the drama just give him the Harem MC CYOA

Nice chapter! I think the MC feeling guilty makes it 'more real', good job! It's also necessary for his character development and is only temporary anyway. A world without piracy? Luffy would hate to be in MHA!

Oh come on...... this is nothing new isn't it? The author keep dragging out all this inner monologue that most people wouldn't even remember or just skim it..... This is just another filler chapter.

Aizawa's ability doesn't work if he can't see your skin.

I hope he stops being a crybaby and gets rumi and momo soon

I think the biggest criticism, and this is something you've done in basically every work I've read of yours. You go on long internal monologues, for things you've already had long internal monologues for. You've literally brought up the exact same social issues once every 5 chapters at best, in full multiparagraph monologues. We're not goldfish, we can remember the points you made a few chapters ago, and the perspective you're trying to establish. Your writing has improved over the years in some ways, but this is one aspect that has arguably gotten worse.

it's good that it have a internal struggles but please be fast with it, it's enough with shishio that it got to 200+ chapters before he got out of is self torture. i know its for character development but if it takes too long it will be kinda trashy character mc.

no! I don't see drama in tags.

I've become immune to drama as I know it is just a process and he will overcome it later. I mean a story will be bland if it doesn't have a part that you have to persevere to read. It is always the build up and foundation that makes that later story good. So this drama hahaha I can bear with it.

I was listening to Briteny Spears Toxic while reading lols

It's kind of hard to write a serious comment when a dozen other people already have. By then, it feels like you're throwing dirty napkins at the author for the sake of throwing. Writing is stressful work. I get why so many people leave a "Thanks for the chapter!". So... Thanx!