Comments of chapter undefined of Humanity Online: World Sanctuary

Sessy, i know I promised to only moderately hate the cliffs. But I dont think that's possible anymore

You are a great author and all. But you gitta stop with all the cliffhangers. My heart can only take so much😓😓

My favorite Webnovel. Hands down

hey author i love your chapter and the build of main and side character.......with background the only thing which i am not able to grasp is your release schedule

whaaaatt??? where was she? who took her away and then returned her???

Okay i have completely lost track of when what happens chronologically be dammed Though im starting to wonder who carmens parents/guardians are

Either someone is experimenting on her body (usIng her for gameplay) or she has a connection with the devs.... hmm

i hate these cliffs

The plot behind the expo attack thickens. Calling it now Carmen was a child secret agent. That is turning against the secret society/organization.

why are all the authors I like so great at cliffhangers thanks for the chapter

Sad and emotional.😭 She doesn't even know.😢

gahhhh i keep thinking the onion ninjas are safely locked outside, then i read some beautifully worded phrase and realize I left the window open.

ok this story be going wacko, I love it

I loved it yes! it wAs the best!!!

shit that's scary...she disappeared and no one knew?

I just realized something. The sis willingly and knowingly worked for the bad guys to help collected evidence against them with Carmen. That’s how she knew about and worked on the bomber. It’s super convenient that VirTech just happened to have on extra med-bed, and that she was missing from the hospital most of the time, as well as the quick transfer paperwork, almost like it was already in place. Either VirTech knew what she was doing and wants the info and brains she has, or she was taken by the bad guys for her brains and is possibly in a medical coma, or (major plot twist) VirTech is the bad guys. My more far-fetched theory is that the AI is modeled off her (hello female identity and liking for Erebus). Or that she was planning to reveal the bad guys and that’s why they bombed the World Tech Fair. To try to silence her

OOOOOF, And they call *me* cruel?!?! Hahaha So glad you’re enjoying the story, and please feel free to always send along any more devious ideas you come up with!

The only thing i dont like about these last chapters is that my man has been ntr’d by his own sister...

hnnng i try not to be overly critical cuz words are hard and i love this story so much but i just gotta say that i think it might have been better if you cut up Carmen's speech and maybe showed us some more narration, like how she's acting or how xiu is acting/feeling... idk that might just be my personal style it's probably fine as is too. but if you're cutting dialogue up into separate paragraphs, you should put an open " at the beginning of each. i kept having to re-read to see if i was missing an end " somewhere and it had switched over. STILL LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY I'M SORRY HOPE YOU ARE FEELING BETTER