Comments of chapter undefined of My Multiverse Trip
My Multiverse Trip
Ryan_Colman
Chapter comments29
I appreciate you adding this, man! I have a couple more suggestions for sometime in the future. You might not want to include all of this, but this is just my own ideas... - Maybe add a section for some other notable Kingdom members that aren't specifically in the harem such as... - James, Lily, and Harry Potter, Merlin, Dumbledore, etc. - Ryan's Naruto & HP world parents (the Diggorys), the Weasleys, etc. - The Faceless assassins. - That one group with that old lady controlling that one kingdom from Game of Thrones, don't remember the name. Also, others from GoT, like John and his wife and the "weird creepy tree people ๐" - Mention the many nameless orphans/slaves - (and possibly include these people's relationshi** and basic, BASIC descriptions for the poor souls like me who haven't watched game of Thrones and other certain worlds Ryan went to (mainly BLEACH ๐ข so confusing for me. I had to intensely read through the entire Fandom of all of these to know who was who and know what was going on, lol). - Maybe at one point, if you want to, add another page, marked *SPOILER* that includes some basic information of his travels/collections across the Multiverse, such as... - His giant gold ball of destruction with its origins (several Fort Knox's and other sources) - The titanic. - His philosophers stones and other stones that generate gold (with its amount and origins, describing his wishes from Aladdin of course) - The Death Note - His different bodies with their powers, his different collected cultivation levels and abilities (i.e. His vampire body bloodline and ability descriptions, that one high-level cultivation body with the rings (don't remember which world its from. It was the one with Shrek academy I think?, etc.) - Also, list his various acquired and modified vehicles and spaceship(s) and his world building tool thing and its capabilities. - It might be a good idea to keep track of his approximate amount of money, or at least his approximate money making ability in various aspects, like the money he makes from auto-selling in his kingdom or something. Once you finish up to this point, if you just make a note somewhere as you write, it will be much easier to just edit these as the story progresses!! Anyways, that's just some suggestions. I appreciate you taking my suggestion to make this chapter. I appreciate how you always read and respond to reader comments, you are my favorite author. I love this novel and I hope you continue to keep up the good work!!!
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