ReincarnatedSaint
I just realized why I don't like the mc. He was born with powerful parents, most people here would be arrogant , confident and acts like they aren't afraid of anyone cause he has powerful parents(well before the awakening ceremony he should have been like that) But his personality right now is a big turn off. I get it that it should be for the so called "character development" but why? Why is he timid,easily stutters,and stupid despite having powerful parents since birth?
I think you should focus more on the gradual growth of the Mc rather than all these quests him just genuinely trying to improve also perhaps it’s your plan but his character is not likable in the slightest his weakness is also not palatable make him. Strong enough so he can fight people his intelligence is literally lower than the average person he’s weaker than a normal human being with no powers he has no skill in weapons and is a coward he acts far younger than he is and is abused by others often he annoys me
yeah...Camon even if he hasn't any mana when he did 16 years old..and with father like that he should at least have some knowledge about things...the MC looks like a 6-year-old child asking what? and complaining all time about it...its really hard to read an MC like this...he doesn't seem to have 16/17 year old.
There's people who's personality takes years to change or possibly never change at all much less someone who is living decently. Only way his personality could change is if he was a in a environment or had something going that forces him to change. Like say for example getting stuck in a abyss full of demons and your only way to survive is eating their meat and pretty much becoming a demon yourself lmao