Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancient Genes

Author san , I understand your need to show his agitation,his unchained heightened emotions, but that was cringe. Don't do it again

It is very interesting. But somehow, it does lack the... how can I say this? It doesn't have any of that detailed sentence stuff. Example- I can't believe that she actually agreed to train me. ME! A worthless nobody, I thought with excitement. She was the highest rank in our class and she choose me to train, wow talk about luck. I could barely contain my happiness as I got up from my chair and started to pick up my textbooks. Example END. Do you understand what I mean now? Everything I've seen so far is very direct. Not very detailed. But direct. The story is really great though. I would prefer that it wasn't told as him telling the story, it makes it harder for the author to put detail into the story or novel. But I still like it so far. Keep it up, good sir!

The beginning of the story is confusing

threre are 4 more of them.? mc is not unique

I live how the story builds up stakes and then immediately throws them out the window literally 2 paragraphs later, completely destroying any interest I had

I've read enough webnovels to guess a few things so I just skipped the capitals.

it was a little bit confusing i guess

What do you think guys about this one?

amazing book post more

nice

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I can never understand how people justify sealing away your greatest enemy by sacrificing their life... like he's still alive and healing while you who just gave his life to deal him was the only deterrent between him and total annihilation. they always come back and for some reason there are always some "dark disciples" that want nothing more than to see the world burn. so technically that's a fail in my book🤷🏾‍♂️🤷🏾‍♂️🤷🏾‍♂️

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the best book ever 😍😍🤩 I've been trying to find a book that's as good as this but I still can't get one

the best book ever [img=update][img=update] I've been trying to find a book that's as good as this one but I still don't get one

I love this book, who's your favorite character

The cliché of the guy who calls himself god but can't do anything hahahaha I don't ask why he appears when he's just useless