Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!]

bro not trying to be an ass but this is stupid.....theres no progress..no character development..no story....plus...its going to be a boring story if MC is going to start from cannon time cause there are so many FF like this..I suggest..re write this to make it unique..Make MC travel a few years before cannon and do some **** ex:save robin...fight kaido...save arabasta.....help free salves or some **** like that..or an AU..OR Make MC a self-insert for Some character like crocodile..ceaser...rob lucci..doflamingo or some new OC...also add your elements cause it interesting....right now its boring and not special at all

hey author don't read the comments people want you to do all the work to make our fanfiction theirs, like making a fanfiction in their own image even saying to re-write, ignore em there's no such thing as originality if people think there is you just haven't searched for it hard enough and it's like those Battle Royal games but they believe a new released one got copied by an old released one... I for one think they copied Wrestling y'know king of the hill and rumble and what not's

I just thought of a funny thing : If Zoro or Zaraki Kenpachi had his second ability Their first blood to inject would be the south bird's To get its awareness of directions ....... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

if you skip the canon then dont worry to spoiled the canon just recruit all the character you like and go adventure yourself (screw luffy) so my advice dont be half-half just be brave and go forward.collect and enjoy

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I hope he reaches the pinnacle of world power in a few chapters, and the rest of the chapters travel, have fun and so on.

if it gets stronger over the next 70 chapters, it’s sad how you cut the power or misjudge the gains and comparisons.

I see many more chapters in this world, and I do not understand it. Will you diminish his power for so many chapters? he has to go 50 power-ups :(? in your opinion, he is already close to kaido, 1 power-up and he is as strong as kaido, 1-2 more power-ups and he reaches the limit of strength in this world (you can move on to the next, why pull 70+ chapters?

I hope that you will not reduce his strength in battle (before strengthening you compared him to a vice admiral, but now that he went through how many positive effects, he should already have a stronger and more durable body than Kaikdo)

Shit this is crazy!