Comments of chapter undefined of Falling in Love : I love you, Today and Forever

I don't know, this story has a lot of good substance, but it is clearly written by someone who's first language is not English. It really needs to be edited, and there is a lot of nonsensical violence. The dots are not really connecting and there is a lot of lying to build relationships and it should lead to not having relationships at all in the end. It is nigh on impossible that any of the characters except for Rachel and Daniel will stay together, barring extreme circumstances. I also don't understand Daniel's thinking on being adopted, no one I know who has found out later in life has thought that it would affect their relationship with other people. Overall, this story needs to be pared down and strengthened at the story points.

So.. what happened to Linda?

Love how the story is Telling with details evry moves it make it for the reader more Easy to imagen and see how the reaccion of the caracters

Better tell on your own or else

I guess They are taking a lot of risk not telling ivy and aria about their father........I can imagine the situation when they will get to know that Noah and Joshua knew all along where their father was....... thank you for update 😘😘😘