I don't know, this story has a lot of good substance, but it is clearly written by someone who's first language is not English. It really needs to be edited, and there is a lot of nonsensical violence. The dots are not really connecting and there is a lot of lying to build relationships and it should lead to not having relationships at all in the end. It is nigh on impossible that any of the characters except for Rachel and Daniel will stay together, barring extreme circumstances. I also don't understand Daniel's thinking on being adopted, no one I know who has found out later in life has thought that it would affect their relationship with other people. Overall, this story needs to be pared down and strengthened at the story points.