Comments of chapter undefined of Elder Blood Witcher
Elder Blood Witcher
Niggross
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I really dont like what you’ve done with fluer. you’ve set up a potential harem just to pick 1 girl and also he never did end it with fluer as he made a way for her to contact him and with all the world hopping he does he literally could have met her from time to time. if you actually ended the relationship then that would be fine but you didnt and it just feels like NTR
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Niggross
Basically what the author did was that all the episodes in which the couple of Fleur, Ciri and Reima developed is **** in a single episode. And the worst thing is that I want to keep reading what is going to happen to Bill. And with Fleur I like the character and I fell in love with her at the time but now I don't know what to think. The only thing I know is that everything is the fault of Reima and the Author
Ok so, I wont demand you change your story (I have no right) Nor will I complain it went in a direction I dislike, I just want to air out some problems that came up with this chapter. You left the Fleur situation very open-ended, leaving many, myself included, to believe she would one day join Reima and Ciri again. Obviously this was not required to happen, but that was the impression I got from the final scene with them. Fleur declaring her love for Reima and Reima giving her a way to easily connect with each other. Unless this is happening to deepen their relationship somehow (Weasley manipulation/Potions/Magic ****ery) then it really came out of no where. That Fleur got together with Bill despite the massive interference to canon is already difficult to swallow. The fact that Fleur didn't even once call Reima is also unbelievable, especially that she didn't call him when the war started (She knows how powerful he is, therefore she knows he would be fine.) If she didn't call him because she loved him and didn't want him hurt, it doesn't make sense why she is with Weasley. Fleur also doesn't strike me as the type to let millions die out of pettiness (If she didn't call Reima because she hated him for leaving her.) So no matter what, I can't see a situation in which case this is feasible, at least without some potion/magic manipulation. Now it would start to make sense if Fleur is under some kind of mind control and that's why she couldn't contact Reima, and why she downgraded so very much. This would actually be a pretty interesting arc, Reima slowly noticing inconsistencies in her behaviour and being determined to find out why she was so hesitant to reach out to him. Now with Reima, this is a problem I wanted to air out a few dozen chapters back but couldn't decide how to word it. Why the hell did Reima not even once think of Fleur? He loved her, or at least dearly cared for her. Apparently the second he left the HP world her entire existence was wiped from his mind. I dont think I remember a single mention of her for dozens of chapters. It doesn't make sense that Reima didn't try to visit her even once on an off-day (Which we have seen him abruptly take). It would literally take a second for him to teleport to her world, probably less than a minute to find her. Instead what we have is a rather frustrating future between the relationship of the MC and a love interest that I was honestly rooting for so much more than Ciri. In the end, they didn't break up and for whatever reason Reima hasn't visited her in possibly years despite clearly having the capability and time to do so. Fleur, either believing herself forgotten or being controlled, decided to get together with Bill Weasley (for some reason?). When the bombs drop, Fleur doesn't consider contacting the one person even more powerful than dumbledore than can travel between worlds. Further along, the people left in Hogwarts are barely surviving, only Harry can leave because of becoming the Master of Death and they are running out of resources. Now Fleur barely managed to contact Reima, clearly struggling to do so. When Reima arrives she freezes and doesn't reveal herself to him until he calls her out. The most logical conclusion to this is that she is being controlled by someone, probably Weasley. I'll actually be rather disappointed if that's not the case, such a waste of a beautiful relationship. Of course I could be wrong, and if you have any other ideas (Readers or Author) feel free to share, I would love to read them.
Author really has a way of making his fans grind our teeth in frustration/anger, this novel could've easily been a nice harem with all the build up Reima had with the other girls over countless chapters but only to settle with the annoying girl most of us readers didn't even like, and now this stuff with Fleur. these last two chapters really sucked ngl.
At this point I feel like my intelligence is being insulted. Last time with Risryn the author gave the same response. “I thought that i explained that about their relationship but i guess i didnt”. Regardless of all other issues, If your own story is not consistent with itself then it is no longer the same story. Reimas words from the chapter they left “Remember im only a moment away if you call me” Fluer’s Parting words “Farewell my love” There was absolutely no indication of a permanent end to their relationship or even that their parting was sad. They even heggued goodbye and had a threesome the night before. Including a contact method. At the time i was frustrated that Fluer didnt follow Reima as her reason was she didnt want to leave her family behind even though Reima can world travel like he is getting groceries. But now i understand that that tiny implication was the authors way of notifying us it was over. An illogical reason. Author, i believe that the story in your head is not the same one I am reading.
This is last two chaps waa quite shocking for me. I hope Luna will be alright, she is may fav char in HP universe after all. For Fleur its not makes any sense for the author to makes her with the Weasley because she is a veela, which makes her more "horny" when she see a person with strong potential. Reima is basically the most person with the strongest potential that she met, this is basically a huge question mark why the f*** she ends up with the Weasley. Fleur itself is not a character like Cho who can change partner like cats mating, she is a French women, and as typical of French womenis history, they tend to prefer one lover in their lifetime.
all im going to add is that fleur wouldn’t betray mc as a quick look at her fandom page show she is, and i qoute,”Fiercely loyal”. one could see more of Fleur's positive qualities: true courage and FIERCE LOYALTY. She had never forgotten that Harry once saved her sister's life. This caused her to volunteer to escort Harry Potter from 4 Privet Drive, risking both her life and that of her fiance's. So why has she suddenly forgot mc, NTR’ed him and seem distant with him without there being some magic on the weasel side of things, as we have seen some weasels have tried before, aka ron The main plot shouldn’t have taken place as the only readon she didnt go with mc was that she wanted to be with her family, so why is she still in england to work at the bank? And as she is fiercely loyal to harry for saving her sister in the main plot, how can she betray mc in this plot were mc was in the same place as harry was and add on the fact that she loved him and add on the fact that she was raised as a traditional women were they marry once and if the husband dies thats it, how and why has she NTR’ed mc? None of this makes sense. please redo the chapters and dont just upload tomorrow without adressing the issue. sorry for the rant but i love your story and if you go the way your going, your going to end up destroying something that most readers have enjoyed and i personally dont want that. So plz dont ignore the valid complaints and please make the fixes. again sorry for the rant.
