Comments of chapter undefined of Epic of Caterpillar
Epic of Caterpillar
PancakesWitch
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I'm going to be honest reading this entire battle pissed me off from half way through. Don't get me wrong this is purely going to be an opinion and not an insult match. I also don't really plan on going into detail about my analysis of the battle, it would take too long. The main reason I got annoyed at reading this battle was because it was somehow haphazard when compared to other battles in the story. What I mean by Haphazard is that most of it didn't make much sense, from my perspective. First of all, why is it like the MC has suddenly lost hundreds of brain cells and decided to make dumb choices on purpose? Second of all, why did you go out of the way to make the enemy seem like a genuine threat, to then nerf their intelligence even more than the MC's? It makes the fight fairly underwhelming, detracting from the ******* of the battle. I can imagine based on the comments that the author fixed these kinds of plot holes in the rest of the story but i just wanted ask how they ended up there in the first place? What i mean is that everyone was thinking straight and showing fairly high levels of tactical ability during the larger scale war even if there were some mistakes, but then out of nowhere when we come to the small scale combat, tactics and brain be damned charge head on aimlessly. Maybe i'm misunderstanding the characters or maybe i've just read into their actions too much and ended up expecting more from them than they originally had. I don't know. All I know is that i don't understand, so can someone explain why it is so frustrating reading this one scene whilst the rest of the story was so easy and satisfying till now? Even when the MC was at a disadvantage and doing dumb things from the beginning, it was still better than this scene. Now that is over, i just want to say how much I've really enjoyed the story till now. The author was doing a pretty good job at this point of the book even with the grammar problems you could still read the book without your brain feeling fried so keep it up your doing great. I haven't read beyond this battle yet so i'm looking forward to it. Though I would say that The main character is evil there isn't two ways about it, she is evil.
Wait if the king reverse gravity, shouldn’t they float instead of being press down? Gravity as you all know Is what keeps us from floating into space and die. It constantly pulls us towards the planets core aka DOWN Reverse gravity magic should not have increase the gravity for the Mc and wives. You should change it to gravity manipulation instead
This is like an Epic DnD campaign where every boss fight is hard and you almost die a lot... but then you notice it always happens in similar ways and you realize the DM(Author) is just half-invested. After the MC gets powerful, her rolls somehow land on 2... while her opponents magically get 20s until she is almost dead and then magically can beat the level .5 refrigerator door.
I don't know if he has changed but I can tell the author did not appreciate comments that did not conform with his own ideas. Even if these comments were constructive it didn't matter. You could see the author liked comments that praised the author/work or those comments that were very mild in critiquing the work.
